‘LEAVING’ [OC]
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
I think the joke is okay and would have worked if I didn't have to make sense of a number of confusions I had to work through first.
- number being represented by "nr". Nothing wrong here, just something that I'm not familiar with.
- the use of "floop" to represent the sound of the list hitting the floor
- the lines in the doorway representing, what I'm guessing are, stairs and not connected to the employee as I first considered
- the disappearance of the desk from one panel to another
- the path one manager in red took to get to the door from sitting at the desk
I don't know if anyone else has these problems to work through, but having had to work through them muted any enjoyment I would have gotten from the joke had that been absent.
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Ricky Rigatoni 🇺🇸replied to [email protected] last edited by
...yes? I don't understand the confusion here?
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I thought dude fell off a ladder. I was like, "no wonder he quit! It's dangerous!"
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SatansMaggotyCumFartreplied to 🇰 🌀 🇱 🇦 🇳 🇦 🇰 ℹ️ last edited by
How high are you?
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
I think the lines in the doorway represent the list falling. It wouldn't make a lot of sense for the manager's office to be in the basement of a fast food place.
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
Oh. I didn't get that at all.
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Hi, how're you?
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
*FLOFF*
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
I'm going to get downvoted for saying what everyone's already thinking but, fuck it: this is unfunny trash. The only thing worth a damn here is the effort OP clearly put in.
If this is American humour no wonder they elected a man stupider than the average rock.
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
This doesn't cross the "joke" bar, and it's quite low already.
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
TBH, I think Siegfried and Joy have elevated the trick to an art form. (Link is to a very short video example)
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
Damn, bruh. Who put sand in your Fleshlight?
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
Damn, bruh. Did you get a good deal on those upvotes from the bot farm?
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
Get laid, son. It might help you.
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
I expected barrier aggression in doges but no barrier. I am confuzzled. Also no doges.
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
Aw that's cute lol
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I don't understand the last 2 panels. They have me stumped.
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
For the confused: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C0hETFY67F0
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He lifted the list up like a blanket and disappeared like people do when they're playing a trick on their pets
I'm also assuming he sprayed "essence of dog potion" in there for them to react like that but that's another thing
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[email protected]replied to [email protected] last edited by
I feel like them acting like dogs is a punchline without a setup. There's nothing that links the comic to the dogs-freaking-out-when-someone-vanishes meme, so it just comes out of left field without landing comedically.
Imagine that this is a sketch people are performing. Do you laugh when the guys start barking, or are you confused because they start barking for no reason when a guy was just quitting?